Good job and I had a hard time with lag. WHY YOU DO THIS LAG!!!!! I got the video pretty well it overall was a great video
good job i love how you introduce yourself "hi today i am going to show you... ETC.) i wish that you had been a bit louder and i wish your vid didn't lag! (Totally not your fault about the lag) other than that its really good.
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